Poem?! o.O

Well,long time nvr write poem ad...
Hahas.. so tomolo will be my eng exam.. Opps,is today...
I don't noe whether this poem nice or not,so leave comment ya~

You,
as warm as sunlight,
as soft as morning,
but with a core of steel that could not be broken.

You,
like fire burning in ice,
like the keen edge of silver dagger,
and i just couldn't hold up any longer not to hold you tight to me.

Finally i ask myself,
do i have the right to love you?
love you like how much you love me?
My very feeling for you might put you in danger.

If i do love you,
i'll love you as deep as i had never love anyone before,
hold you tight as you are part of my soul,
and finally whispered on you about how much i love you,
and I DO~